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Storm Whisperer's avatar

"You look for me as if I were a destination,

when I’m really a sensation."

What a line to open with. Such a simple truth. That if we grasped it, rather than diminish it, the real true love can blossom. Beautifully written.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Verra 🥰

Noor's avatar

Beautiful poem!🩷

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Noor ✨

Sattie R's avatar

This was beautifully written. It describes safety that comes from everyday care and presence.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you Sattie ✨😊🫶🏼

Brandi Lynn's avatar

This is a beautiful and necessary reframe of love, shifting it away from a prize to be won or an ending to be reached and celebrating it as the quiet, resilient rhythm of showing up in the ordinary moments ✨

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment, Brandi. Greatly appreciated 😊✨

John Sheils's avatar

That’s a beautiful piece of work

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, John ✨😊

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The rock as a point of return... Of course love would be less fireworks and more that stubborn thing under your palm...

Odel Asseille's avatar

indeed

Thank you, Asuka-sama !

anna's avatar

Beautiful poem, Odel! A gentle but powerful reminder that the deepest connections live in the everyday presence, not the arrival.

Thank you for sharing this.❤️

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Anna ✨🫶🏽

anna's avatar

❤️❤️❤️