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AsukaHotaru's avatar

I was trying to be cool... and then the blanket and a cup of chocolate in winter..? Those just got me right in the chest.

Odel Asseille's avatar

You are the mistress of the "cups" in my little room, I thought I could take the liberty of borrowing them, just for this time 😁

Thank you, sempai ☺️

Richard Goetschius's avatar

You wrote that piece Asuka? That's a fantastic poem it punched me right in the heart

Odel Asseille's avatar

Actually, that’s mine with the expression of the “Cup” from Asuka. Our way to get along. Right, Asuka-sama ?

WordSilo's avatar

Living on a prayer, but I'm with you forever. A present from time to time but don't cling to it. <<3

Odel Asseille's avatar

Beautiful line.

Thank you ☺️

Storm Whisperer's avatar

This is the love after the honeymoon period. The one that stays, that does not seek anyone new. The love that I would dare call true love.

Beautiful 🤍

Odel Asseille's avatar

I like to call it daily boring love 😁

Thank you Storm Whispered

Anshikaa Tomar's avatar

A boring man perhaps, but always present... This line describes everything.

And truly the quiet side of our hearts is where the most magic lives.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you Anshikaa,

What comes after the excitement moments can be magical indeed

Charisse Joy Melegrito's avatar

what a beautiful poem! i wish i was as poetic as you 😅

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you 😊

But I believe you have your poetical ways to express things that matters 😁

Charisse Joy Melegrito's avatar

doing my best hihi 😁

Odel Asseille's avatar

That’s already enough ☺️

Sarah Salem's avatar

I can't stand mushy gushy stuff but something about that touched me and didn't feel gross at all. Good job

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Sarah

Belinda Drakes's avatar

Some loves do not arrive dressed for applause.They slip in quietly, like steam from a teacup left beside an open window.No performance. No glitter thrown for strangers.

Just warmth that stays.

Richard Goetschius's avatar

Maybe some day I'll find that special person and be able to fall in love with her. But it's getting harder and harder the older I get. I'm 67 and haven't found it yet.... Rick The Truth Seeker

Belinda Drakes's avatar

Or it will find you 🤍

Odel Asseille's avatar

It’s never too late for that

Odel Asseille's avatar

Exactly,

Thank you, Belinda !

Aaliya's avatar

This is absolutely beautiful…. true connection often lies in the small, consistent gestures rather than grand displays. ♥️

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Aaliya.

Grand displays are important too, but they can become a burden when repeated too often, I think

Farid Baig's avatar

This is beautiful. Very calm and quiet like something that settles slowly in your chest and stays there.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Farid ☺️.

Richard Goetschius's avatar

That's a poem I hope to say to my sweet heart some day if I can allow myself to fall in love just once in my life time.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Just keep it up, it can happen anytime to you, bro

Richard Goetschius's avatar

Thanks, Odell if that comment was meant for me…. Rick The Truth Seeker

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

Very good I meant*

Odel Asseille's avatar

I got it, but I do appreciate the effort to clarify it ✨😁

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

My usual autocorrector

Odel Asseille's avatar

That happens to me more than I could count. Autocorrector or the intensity of the moment (emotions)

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

That too yes

Odel Asseille's avatar

The funny thing is sometimes I realize it hours or even days after.

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

This is calm and settling. Shows comfort. Dry good

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Sara ☺️

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

There’s such a gentle honesty in this poem, the kind that doesn’t try to impress but quietly tells you who he is.

I love how he admits his flaws without drama just a man aware of his limits and still willing to show up.

The contrast between flashy gestures and steady presence feels deeply real; he knows what actually lasts.

There’s something tender in the way he offers comfort warmth in winter, coolness in summer small acts that mean everything.

The little surprises feel sincere, not performative, like love expressed in everyday moments.

I love how he promises attention, listening, and support as lifelong gifts, not temporary efforts.

The image of building a foundation together, stone by stone, feels beautifully grounded and hopeful.

He’s not offering perfection, just consistency a love that doesn’t fade when life gets ordinary.

There’s a softness in his devotion that feels trustworthy, almost old‑fashioned in the best way.

By the end, you believe him completely: this is love meant to endure, not to dazzle.

Sattie R's avatar

I loved this poem. That's love. It doesn't have to involve grand gestures. It's the little things daily that matter. The quiet presence warms the soul.

anna's avatar

This is beautiful ❤️