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stardaisywrites's avatar

I'm always not able to fully and properly appreciate your poem because it's really good I'm at a loss for words. Let me re-read properly again

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Odel Asseille's avatar

😊🎉

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AYUSHI G✨'s avatar

🔥🔥🙌🏻 That was fire , I absolutely loved it >>>>

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Odel Asseille's avatar

☺️💯

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Amit The Storyteller's avatar

Thanks for reading Ayushi 🙌 🌸

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Elise Skibik's avatar

Living in the world with a old soul 👏❤️

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Odel Asseille's avatar

Indeed 🥰

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Amit The Storyteller's avatar

🌻💌

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stardaisywrites's avatar

Your poem is full of resilience and raw emotions. It's simply beautiful. I shouldn't forget to thank the collaborator as well. I don't know which part they wrote but I think I recognise your style as the self reflection part if I'm correct. God bless your inks 🤭

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Amit The Storyteller's avatar

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts ✨️

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Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words. Yes, you're Correct. I wrote the first part.

Amit is one of the best poet I know here in Substack and I should admit that I've been amazed.

Even if I don't use to write and publish poem, I was happy to make that collaboration with Amit. And your appreciation is already the biggest price for us.

Thanks again !

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stardaisywrites's avatar

Awww. This is so lovelyyyyyy

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Amit The Storyteller's avatar

Thank you

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Odel Asseille's avatar

🥰

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