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Sattie R's avatar

I can admit that I have in the past done that. Looking back now I see how foolish it was of me to do so. I sat down and thought back on everything I saw and realized that I was only looking at the surface. I did not look beyond it until I sat to think about everything I saw and experienced then.

Odel Asseille's avatar

I was there too. Thank God we grew up.

Thank you for reading and sharing it, Sattie 🫶🏼🥰❤️✨

Sattie R's avatar

My pleasure Odel. Your posts make me think. I like that.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Glad it did that ✨😊

Sehar Insights's avatar

We do not all know the same pain… Nevertheless, we all carry scars” is such a powerful line. Its a reality of life different lives, different wounds, same human heart.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Exactly.

Thank you for reading and I’m glad something from it resonated with you. Greatly appreciated

Nabanita's avatar

This is a deeply philosophical poem. Most of the troubles in this world stem from the deep divisions we create just to serve our own purpose. You are a visionary poet. Your gentle reminder to find a common humanity in all of us speaks of a better world.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for reading and your kind words, Nabanita. Greatly appreciated ✨🫶🏼

It’s sure that we create a lot of differences to serve our own interests. And somehow, that also makes us alike

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

It's absolutely true!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Indeed.

Thank you Sara 😊✨

Sriasweni's avatar

This is a beautifully written!! It touches on something deeply true about human perception and the nature of extremes.

From my perspective:

Both the absolute ends feel the same but something differs .In the deep darkness - we see nothing, all we hold is fear . In the Too bright side - we see nothing as it blurs our vision but we hold on to the hope.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you @Sriasweni for reading and your king words. Greatly appreciated!

It’s true that the differences are always there, and sometimes, what find uniformity and what hides behind those differences. The same feelings.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The rebellious flowers~ I like that kindness here isn’t some perfect soft thing, it’s more like something stubborn growing where the dirt had every reason to quit.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Indeed ! It’s like when love forces its way where only pain and resentment reign.

Thank you, Asuka-sama !

Hina Gondal's avatar

Wow love this

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Hina ✨