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Mack Devlin's avatar

Beautiful, my friend.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Mack !

The stranger's avatar

So beautiful

I can feel the pain, the heaviness in your poem.

Perfect poem for the prompt 🫂

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, my friend

The stranger's avatar

You're welcome, my friend

Sattie R's avatar

I can feel the heaviness in this poem. My chest felt heavy and tight while reading it and I am still trying to calm down.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Your words say a lot.

If your chest felt heavy while reading, it means you didn’t just read it, you stepped inside it. In the boot with me.

We take time to breath deeply and calm down again.

Thank you, Sattie R

Aaliya's avatar

Such a heartfelt piece with hauntingly beautifully imagery.Your courage in expressing such intense feelings is truly inspiring♥️🫂

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for this, dear one!

Beautifully imagery catch me. I was so concentrate in the heavy feelings that I didn’t take the break to look at the beauty in surviving such feelings and own them.

I’m glad it reached you !

AsukaHotaru's avatar

That coin felt so painfully small in the hand, and still somehow heavier than everything else in the booth...

Odel Asseille's avatar

It’s the heaviest one indeed.

Thanks, Asuka, for everything 🤗

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Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you.

It is about a moment 3 years ago. But I am good now 😊

We are gonna be good, right