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LuminaryAI's avatar

This is a masterpiece of emotional perspective.

We often talk about love as something we possess, but you’ve personified Love as a living entity that wants its host to thrive.

That line "I’m not selfish. I don’t throw tantrums anymore" is so incredibly moving.

It reframes moving on not as a betrayal, but as a continuation of the same energy.

As a reader who looks for the deeper manifestations of love beyond the surface,

I find this 'letter' to be a profound gift to anyone carrying the weight of a 'perfect' past.

Thank you for this.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for your kind words. That means a lot to me.

I know a lot of us suffer from a beautiful past love, I saw people sad, destroying themselves after losing someone they love and who loved them so deeply. I always try to animate those people to live freely and in joy. Because I know to love someone is to care about him/her and want that person to be happy. That’s why I refuse to believe that our loved ones that left us would want us to be sad, but to live happily for them too.

This one is part of ten poems giving a voice to love, if you haven’t get it yet, the collection is available and for free now until tomorrow.

And I would ask, if these words resonate with you, consider leaving a kind and honest review that can help them to touch and get to more people that might need to reed these lines.

Thank you !

AsukaHotaru's avatar

this one is so gently dangerous...

love speaking like that..? calm, patient, refusing to guilt you..? is unfair in the best way.

“different light, same love” really got me. soft permission, not pressure.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you 🥰

Did you already take your free copy on Amazon ✌️☺️?