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Aaliya's avatar

The metaphor of being a ‘cartographer of a corpse’ is incredibly striking. The language is exquisite, this is such a hauntingly beautiful piece. Wow

theinkspilled's avatar

Thank you so much, I truly appreciate how deep it resonated🤍

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Aaliya ! It's really a powerful writing. So much talent here and what a metaphor 🤗

Gary Greene's avatar

Let's talk cartographer I know nothing about it or heard it till now

Hurting my self for a year now tapping away

Trap door by t-bone Burnett after poetry

3 song lyrics and clip

Principles B4 Personalities

Oh now ti complete the final fantasy factor

Mind produces

SHIT

Ego saves the day

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B L A M E

Bitching

Lying

And

Moaning

Everyday

https://youtu.be/k4LOGKmStU0?si=v4TEONVb2OPW5VCa

Gary Greene's avatar

My life and living Usta B those these that and

Yeah🫤😵‍💫🤥But🤥🤕🥵🤬I Know 😜 I know but 🧠🤬 the Mating Call of Assoholic Assholes

BUT

Being

UnCONvinced

Totally B U T

NOW

No

Other

Way

I'm a step up I uhoh🤔🤫🤥as I noticed that

However feels EZR

Harder for me to whoops my voice my EGO to bully me

w/less misses missing the Mark ‼️ again and...as 4 the ammunition I supplied yesterday's yesterdays, till Popeye's 🫟 message reaches past My MIND to my brain 🧠 to inner child and slap the little bugger.

Mix ISM with Infintile

E G O, and the third ingredient SELF the demanding little 👑 King Majesty the baby 🍼 me me my my mine mine NOT now, Right ▶️ NOW

Always inna hurry up to the next New moment where Kodak is

It's L8:30 in the morning 🌅 again, if I made it to 73now and a year now w 2 broken wrists and migraine again my Amigo 🤥🤥🤔🤬🤕🥵 EGO 🤥plays Brutus weaponizes mygraine upon my brain to an open field run 🏈 to the endzone for the score. Right where I seem to be stuck lika truck 🚛 🚒 with a French 🍟 fries short of a happy meal as far as my shortcomings communicating with

Stunted way back

Check ✔️ this song by Tanya Stevens

Way Back too 2 tracing my track record w my photographic memory. Yuppers

That's how I got the grades by like retracing my visual 🪜 steps. Like 12 steps

STEPS

Solutions

To

Every

Problem

Solved

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Odel Asseille's avatar

One of the greatest lines ever ✨