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Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

That feeling of thinking you’re immune to something… and then realizing you’re not at all… you captured that so well. There’s something really honest in the way this unfolds.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Andrea

AsukaHotaru's avatar

that dial of our very balance line... it felt so exact and dangerous and a little too intimate...

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thanks , Asuka!

Awareness can make us dangerous for sure, real demons 😈😈😀🤣

Hai Dang's avatar

Beautiful piece, Odel.

I'm touched. The game... My eyes see the ends, but my heart yell hope. Hidden behind my smile, only pain that I couldn't cry.

Thank you for sharing.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Beautiful line ✨

Thank you Wordsilo

Órla Kenny's avatar

A well-written piece, Odel.

I've been there and yes.. I believe there is that kind of "love", and there is the love that God has designed that very few people ever find.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Órla. I believe so too