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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

What a great collection of possibilities for a better future and better now Odel.

To your almost last question - Would life be better? Maybe we should at least try to make it better by giving this an attempt.

One idea at a time, per day; smile at a stranger (not in a weird way!), help someone without needing, give space to listen to someone without thinking about your own next words, etc.

Through little things, big changes can happen over time.

Odel Asseille's avatar

I couldn’t agree more with you. On little action at a time. Sometimes we may think they are insignificant but they are so powerful. It feels good when we are heard, seen… Little actions, big impacts.

Thank you @Mark Crutchfield for your thoughtful comment. Greatly appreciated

Nick Hills's avatar

What a wonderful world will be! Great poem, I love it!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you Nick ! I’m glad you loved it. Greatly appreciated

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

What if! I so wish we could! The possibilities for a peaceful society are endless if we could only all come together with the understanding that we need each other. We thrive in community. It’s devastation when we sink into individuality. Empathy is the most precious thing because love flows in gentle cycles, but it has to start with the ability to have the heart open. Beautiful post!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you Dorie.

The possibilities for a peaceful society indeed are there, and we know them. We scare of being deceived, so we protect ourselves and sadly that’s what divides us

Jacqueline's avatar

So beautiful and deeply felt. Thank you. 🖤

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for reading it and your kind words ☺️ greatly appreciated

Storm Whisperer's avatar

"What if we opened our hearts, set aside caution and fear, and truly let ourselves be seen."

What if... what if...

Beautiful and wonderfully written. 🤍

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for reading, sharing and your kind words! Greatly appreciated 🥰🫶🏼✨

What if… could we be better ?

Tianna Diamond's avatar

I really love this. I think like would be better, smoother…more aligned. It’d be a cool thing to witness. ❤️

Odel Asseille's avatar

I think that as well.

Thank you 🫶🏼✨

They Were Children's avatar

This is really, really good. And, oh, so desirable. :)

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for reading and for your comment. Greatly appreciated.

And thanks for subscribing and welcome to The Mirror Room✨😊

AsukaHotaru's avatar

My brain kept circling the bridge image... I’m so soft for that tiny almost-brave move toward the middle, like maybe nobody has to arrive perfect, just a little less guarded~

Odel Asseille's avatar

Nobody has to arrive perfect, just willing to make the steps forward.

Thank you @AsukaHotaru

Be Budding's avatar

Beautiful 'What if' post 😍

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you for reading it and for your lovely comment. Greatly appreciated

Be Budding's avatar

❤️

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Excellent writing Odel. It feels especially relevant and apt,given where we are in the world (and even just on Substack at times, lately).

Being better and more compassionate to each other is something that is there and possible, it is that willingness and taking those steps to get there, which is, much of the time, the action missing in reaching that.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you Gary.

Indeed each of them can be possible if we dare to do what is necessary for that. That’s where things got complicated

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

Sometimes our life sounds like a collection of "what if's"... this is a piece worth reading.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Indeed !

Thank you for your kind words. Greatly appreciated

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

Thank you for writing:)

Sattie R's avatar

This was beautifully written. Those "what if's" are what I pray for in my relationship. One where we are fully ourselves, seen, heard, accepted. We may not fully understand everything, but that presence, patience and acceptance make a huge difference. There will still be moments where conflicts may arise, but the relationship would be better. We would face them together, not letting wounds expand, but rather suture them with care, patience and love.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thanks for reading and for your thoughtful comment. Greatly appreciated !

I believe there should be at least one person to make that possible

Nabanita's avatar

Odel, thank you for showing us that a better world is out there. We just have to be willing to reach for it. Beautiful poem!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you @Nabanita. And you’re right, the will to reach it is the harder part

feelingsundefined's avatar

Simply, this is perfectly written! ❤️

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you @feelingsundefined. Greatly appreciated

feelingsundefined's avatar

❤️

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Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Nikita.

Actually the comment made me smile a little and wondering “what does “men are suspicious era” have to do with the poem 😀?

But I’m happy you found it good and that’s greatly appreciated

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Odel Asseille's avatar

I should be lucky then 😀. Thank you, dear one

Papi Jack's avatar

I don’t blame you

We men are devious species