9 Comments
User's avatar
Marissa Purdum's avatar

Well done.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Marissa ☺️

Michael Hatcher's avatar

What an awesome thought! I really love your optimism and humanism! And, of course, it's beautifully written! This page is quickly becoming one of my go-to's! Have an awesome day, Odel!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you so much 😊 I truly appreciate that. Sure we don’t write for applaud, but people like yours make it feel that it worth doing it fiercely.

Thanks 🙏🏼

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Odel, you just walked up to humanity, poked it in the ribs, and said, “Hey, you—yes you—come sit, we’re all equally chaotic.”

This poem feels like a group hug where everyone pretends they’re fine until someone sneezes and the whole room laughs.

Thank you for reminding me my heart isn’t malfunctioning… it’s simply doing the standard human firmware update.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Asuka Asura ☺️ we are all alike.

Maybe I am worse in the good way 🤣🤣🤣

Thank you for your kind words. As always.

Amit The Storyteller's avatar

Beautiful poem I really like this ✨️💫

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you so much, Amit ☺️

User's avatar
Comment removed
Dec 12
Comment removed
Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you !

It's life. We all face the same struggle, the same things, sometimes within different faces, but...