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AsukaHotaru's avatar

You were so hard on the heart for nine acts that I wanted to defend the poor thing by the end... Letting reason and heart finally stop fighting felt kinder than making either one surrender.

Odel Asseille's avatar

I didn’t go easy on it, indeed. It kinda deserved it too 😄

Darryl Wade Anderson's avatar

Beautiful, in a brutally honest way, like talking to your best friend and your worst enemy at once. You have succeeded. I felt it to my soul.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you so much for reading it and for your king words 🤗✨ truly appreciated