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Nabanita's avatar

You convey the deepest fears that make us run from ourselves so powerfully.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Ma☺️

the stranger's avatar

The way you convey fears and visualize them is brilliant.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, my brother 😊

the stranger's avatar

You're most welcome!

AsukaHotaru's avatar

I hate that you can spend years trying not to get wet and only later notice the roof was leaking the whole time.

Odel Asseille's avatar

That’s kinda frustrating, right

Sattie R's avatar

This was beautifully written, Odel. When we run from ourselves we avoid tending to our wounds. When we avoid ourselves others may get hurt, ourselves included.

Aaliya's avatar

The metaphor of the night as a wounded animal is so vivid. It really makes you think about the things we run from and why.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, dear one.

Sure it is, cause the animal is also wounded

Tombarriesimmons's avatar

I would really appreciate the meaning you have behind the poem x

Odel Asseille's avatar

It’s about avoidance. What we try to avoid can be sometimes the things that can help us understanding some things about ourselves. I will talk more about it in the reflection of the week coming out on Wednesday.

Tombarriesimmons's avatar

Now I see ..... my mind was wondering through the half filled attics of my memories x

Odel Asseille's avatar

I understand and that’s a good thing as well