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Jess, The Creator's avatar

Another amazing poem, Odel!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you Jess ☺️🙏🏼

Jess, The Creator's avatar

You’re very welcome, Odel!

Belinda Drakes's avatar

This made me think about how often we confuse healing with removing the parts of ourselves we no longer want to carry, when maybe wholeness asks us to understand those pieces and make room for them without allowing them to define us. I especially connected with the idea that there is so much of ourselves beyond what we consciously see. We are always becoming, uncovering, remembering, and meeting ourselves again. Beautifully thought provoking piece. It gave me something to sit with

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you so much, Belinda ! I’m glad something from it fount a place with you. Indeed we often try to remove or hide part of us we don’t want others to see or when we think they are bad, but at the end of the day, they are part of ourselves. Understanding them may help us carry them a better way

Madonna's avatar

Such a beautiful poem, Odel❤️

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you so much, Madonna 🥰

The Sky Is Blue Everywhere's avatar

Such a great Tuesday morning read!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, dear one

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The lion gets to keep its teeth and nobody asks it to be less lion. I want that deal too, Odel. I’m tired of acting like the harder parts of me have to wait outside before I’m allowed to call myself whole.

Odel Asseille's avatar

That’s the mindset. You are free to be whole, sempai ☺️

Aaliya's avatar

So profound and beautifully expressed

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you dear one 🥰

Roger Browne's avatar

oh, we are talking about poets here :) yeah. give your all, not just your performance 🫶

Odel Asseille's avatar

Roger that ☺️✨ thank you very much ✨☺️

Alex Searle's avatar

'A heart balanced between beauty and danger'

The challenge of living a life worth living encapsulated right there. Bravo!

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you, Alex. I see where that’s statement is leading us and I love it. Greatly appreciated 🤗

Judith Frizlen's avatar

Evocative! I felt it.

Odel Asseille's avatar

Thank you very much, Judith ! I’m glad you felt it 🥰